The Unfitting Adventure

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The Unfitting Adventure

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Ok this is my first story in the Drakkar forums but i have been doing alot of Fanfics in Fanfiction.net.

Copyrighted to Magnum (I changed some things like i gave charcters emotion in game)

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"Hahahaha...." a mighty voice said. It was the day he would make the face of Drakkar different....


"OK, this should do it and im all registered my Username is SealOfDark" a boy said. As he logged in he saw many players talking in the chat. After he created his character named Darkseal (Fighter). He was walking through the vast School of Nork. There he met a girl player named Mint, she was going to be a ment.


"Oh hi there Darkseal." she said with smile. They went to the trainers together.


The kobold fight was approaching. They sensed another feeling not like the ones they used to feel in the other parts. It said "You feel a dark chill", as they went up they saw nothing was there but then a monster came out. It was unusual it wasnt supposed to be in the place they were supposed to be. It was a Vanidor.


"Darkseal this isnt supposed to be here!!!!" Mint yelled. "Its a Cobrahn lair." Darkseal replied while being frozen with fear.


They died. But when they restored they were in cob. They were not supposed to be there since they were on free accts. They saw a player named Tibris____YoD. He asked them what killed them.


"Vanidor killed us..." Mint said. Tibris was thinking how would it be possible that Vanidor would appear while they were free.


They tried to go back to Nork but it said Remove your Cobrahn gear. But they didnt have any gear on....................



Chapter one: Vanidor Strikes Done
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Its quite short and not quite good since its 2am here and im sleepy chapter 2 is when i wake up :D
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Chapter 2: The Inner Plate

Last time Darkseal and Mint were confronted by Vanidor. As they were killed and restored they somehow got into Cobrahn. While walking around the Tree Town they met a player named Tibris. Darkseal was wondering how they got in but they could not get out, even though he had no Cob armor........


"Let's go ask the sysops whats wrong." Darkseal told Tibris and Mint. So they pm'ed a sysop and the sysop told them to get the accts deleted. But once the sysop tried to delete it, the deletion could not be done. A system error occured so all players got back to level one. The sysop knew that this was a defect made by a Bug Hacker. So the sysop told them to stay put until the problem was resolved.


Darkseal was looking at the chat lobby and he saw that people were talking about someone who got killed in Drakkar got locked accts. A sysop replied to their conversation and said " A Bug Hacker did this so be careful when you die.". Everyone wanted to try to find it but only 20 players were left and it got lower and lower by the day.


Mint was going to the ment trainer and then a BD jumped im front of her. Darkseal saw her an rushed to save her. Tibris was shouting at Darkseal to not go in there. Darkseal was very angry at the BD for going near Mint. He was glowing and he saw text that saw his character say SEAL OF FATE. Then a massive beam hit the bd and suddenly Darkseal had an eatable core in his hands it had three ounces he ate it and threw it to Mint she ate it then threw it to Tibris and he ate it. They suddenly felt that their stats went all to 25 base and thier lvls went up by 20/20. Tibris got gear in his locker and beat the BD. Darkseal was wondering how he could do such a spell making the enemy's power decrease by alot and getting stuff from them. He must know why it might be the cause of all this problems.


Next Chapter: Death of Timmeh, Enter Gold Dragon
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Chapter 3: Death of Timmeh, Enter Gold Dragon


"Its all coming according to my plan." The mysterious voice said.


"What is this power......?" Darkseal said. Overwhelmed by the power he weilds, he decided to go to Timmy Town. He ventured across the field of Cobrahn along with Tibris and Mint. They hit the stairs of Timmy Caves they went up then the chat sound rang it said there were Gold Dragons everywhere in Timmeh's house. The group ran swiftly to Timmeh's house. Once they got there cages entrapped Tibris and Mint. Darkseal was the one left, but Timmeh was killed by the GDs. So he was very desperate in fighting the Dragons. He slashed the first Dragon in its head but it was too hard to pierce. So he was running out of ihs. Then ForeverdeaWILD came in and healed Darkseal when he was so confident to beat the GDs, he was so quick the dragons could not hurt him. He was so happy, he was sure he would win. Then his curvy sword starded glowing like his body when he fought BD. Then it came out again the words SEAL OF FATE then a voice said. "Channel the power to your blade." he did channel it into his sword and then his sword grew into a sword so large. And then he slashed the GDs ans then they all died 1 hit he got a +20/20 core and +10 curvy sword.


"You're quite good" Foreverdead said to Darkseal. They talked about the incident of what happened to Darkseal being stuck in cob after releasing Mint and Tibris. Then Darkseal gave the +20/20 core to Foreverdead. They found a mirror it might be a clue.
What would it be to thier quest to save Drakkar. Find out in chapter 4.


Next Chapter 4:The Mirror of Aleria
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BTW you guys can post reviews
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We are all for inventive stories . . .

Perhaps in years to come it will be honed to perfection.

Don't let anyone stop you posting.
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Chapter 4: Mirror Of Aleria (This is where I come in, im the bad guy lol)


The rain swept pass the Steel flower Inn, the night was cold. A player named Magnum______SD was walking around trying to find a staff of the Great Norken Mentalist Chipuda. He was searching high and low for it, and he found it in the place not much people would look. The Sea Hag Lair he went there alone, the Hag could not hurt him. He was as powerful as Merkon combined with Snowbeast, Vanidor and Koss. He found the Chipuda Staff right in the bottom of the water. He owned it he kept it there for protection. At SF half of the remaining players were gathering to keep safety. But then Magnum as a Barbarian broke the Chipuda staff and all of them died. Aleria was empty, Nork was empty, Nameless was empty. Cobrahn was the last place players were. The end of Drakkar may be near..........


Meanwhile in Timmy Town, Darkseal was looking at the Mirror he just found. It was like a gem so clear and nice. But suddenly a thief snatched it from him. And told him to meet him at the highest level of Psi Tower alone. He reached it up to the top, he saw the thief jump into a vortex. He jumped too, he was in a hurricane like chamber that kept turning and turning until he reached the bottom. Darkseal appeared in Aleria he was in the castle of Duke Talinar, he found himself in a maze. He kept looking on sites for the map of the maze but it didn't exist. So he ventured across murky, dusty and quiet hallways. Meanwhile in Cobrahn.


"Where is Darkseal?" Tibris asked Mint and Foreverdead. They told Tibris that he was sitting in a spot a while ago. And they looked for him, after a while they stumbled across Magnum. Foreverdead and Tibris said hi to him because they knew he was StillDaggerX. They wondered if he got pay, but they looked at his username and he was a free player. Magnum told them that he was killed by a lair then he restored in tree town. They told Magnum that that happened to Darkseal too. And another thing they were surprised of was that he was at level 75/35. They asked him how he got that, Magnum replied that he got it after he restored. So they kept looking for Darkseal but they did not know that he was in Aleria until the lobby was fixed. Darkseal was saying he was teleported into an unknown maze. So Tibris and Foreverdead went to Aleria to find him. Mint and Magnum could not get to Aleria because of what happened to them.


He was getting more nervous after every step he took in that maze, if he could not get out it might be the end of Drakkar. So believing in his character and the support his friends gave him, he was drawn to a room that had a large throne in the middle. He was walking quietly while afraid that he might get caught in a trap or maybe a lair would get lucky and beat him even before he unleashes his power. On the bookshelf he stumbled on to there was a pedestal where a book called "The Unventured Realms of Drakkar by SwiftSteal". Darkseal suddenly knew that this was really a part of Drakkar that was never seen. He peeked at the book and he saw the Norken Palace, it was buried under the SteelFlower after the first version of the game. It was said to have been the resting place of the legendary monster that is the master of the Queenservant. It was the Drakkar, the Drakkar according to the picture was a mixture of Snowbeast, Naga, Mama RD, and Queenservant. It was recorded as a strong lair, the player who must have created this book fought the Drakkar. In here there is a short sentence from the maker of the book. "Look in the throne young adventurer if you are worthy for power you must sit on the throne and wait for the Drakkar to come if you could beat it you will..........." the other part was illegible. But feeling his instinct and courage he sat on the throne and waited. A rumbling sound came from his back, and he heard. "Young warrior I shall test if you are worthy to become the one to save us all!!!!!!!!!!!!!". Darkseal gasped he saw a large snakelike dragon bear in his back. He was ready to fight, his sword was glowing, he unsheathed it. "Im ready!" Darkseal shouted.


Next Chapter: The Fate Dissolves
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The Editor has fixed the "glitches" <G>

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Lol thnx Mars
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Chapter 5: The Fate Dissolves


"The time has come to find the chosen one to save the kingdom, but first i must remove all your power all you will have is your mind, body and strength for this challenge" the Drakkar said. So Darkseal's SEAL OF FATE was dissolved due to the power used by the Drakkar. He didnt know how to beat it but instead of wondering, he swiftly attacked it with no visible damage. He was overwhelmed by the Drakkars superb strentgh. Darkseal thought to himself how would he destroy such a beast without his stats and skills. But suddenly a thrust of energy came from no where and hit the Drakkar. It notched it a by 2. Then a underground dweller named Mrbig came out from no where.


"Need some help?" Mrbig said. Darkseal was laughing a bit and then he said that he could use some help. So they thought of a plan, it was stab and spear. Darkseal would stab to get attention while Mrbig used ESpear. It was a good plan, after several hours of fighting the Drakkar, Mrbig hit it with his Chipper staff. Again it did no visible damage. So he tried to used Espear but again no damage. He wondered because awhile ago it did alot of damage to the Drakkar. The Drakkar healed itself. Then it used a beam on Mrbig, Mrbig died but his account didnt get locked.


"Why did you spare him Drakkar?" Darkseal asked. "He will be important to you mission if you succeed in beating me!" It replied. So Darkseal lost his skills but he thought to himself that the seal of fate was coming from the inner power of his character. So if he thought that it would come back it would come back. Then he stood still while the Drakkar was ready to pierce him. The Drakkar attacked then a light resonated from Darkseal's body then he said "SEAL OF FATE CHANNEL MY POWER INTO MY SWORD!!". The Sword of Fate emerged from the light. The Drakkar was surprised that he could release it. Darkseal took a slash to the head of the Drakkar to its tail.


The Drakkar was dead, it said to Darkseal. "Go d.......down thi.....s. pud....d...le a.....n........d you w...il...l fi........nd w......h.....at y....ou s......e.....e...k...........". Darkseal found the chest of the master at the bottom. There he found the +20 sword of masters, 10/10 robe of masters, and the +17 shield of reed. Then he went back to Cobrahn while carrying Mrbigs body. But the thief who stole the mirror challenged Darkseal. If he loses he will never bother Darkseal ever again........



Next Chapter: Thief of The Willows.
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Im halfway through chapter 6. From chapter 6 to 10 each chapter is longer than all i have written right now. So updates will take a bit longer.
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Magnum, I have to say your writing is very clever and well written. Keep it up and maybe one day your books will get us a Drakkar Movie like Harry Potter.

Good luck

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Im so sorry for the very long delay of the next update. Anyway the next chapter will be posted tommorrow.
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